Any one know good English.please verify my sentence is right or wrong!?

Question

the sentence is

"Tourism is a travel from one Destination to another for relaxing and enjoying for a short period of time"

if there is any mistake done please mention.

Answer 1

Travel is a verb not a noun so you could say "Tourism is traveling..."

and destination is not capitalized

and relaxation and enjoyment rather than relaxing and enjoying.

Answer 2

Tourism is traveling,for a short period of time, from one destination to another for the purpose of enjoying relaxation.

** Thats how i would write it**

Answer 3

Travel should change to travelling , the 'D' in destination should be lower case.

However, if I were in your place, I would write the sentence as follows:

Tourism is essentially travelling from one destination to another in order to relax and enjoy for a short period of time.