Any poet on line?? I need your inspiration?

Question

I'm looking for a more heart-felt, touching sentence to say "I walked through many different countries checking what the horizon had to offer". The rest of the poem establishes there is no place like my home. I appreciate all the help I can get. Thank you

Answer 1

ok well i am a poet onilne but i dont read or write any of that type of stuff

Answer 2

I journeyed, chasing horizons

through countries unknown

seeking, but never finding

that which home gave

Answer 3

My soles trod the paths from east to west and north to south, I searched the horizon for the answers and they were not there.  A search of my heart finally revealed to me that which I thought I had lost.

Answer 4

O! The countries I have

seen... the

horizons I have

watched... for what?

The answers just aren't

there.

♥

Answer 5

i stumbled through the dreary landscapes

which some people call home

but could not find any sense of it.

kinda cliche but could u post the whole poem?? that would help ALOT

Answer 6

How many countries?

How many horizons....

What sunrise lights

My way?

Answer 7

winding through life

each new horizon

only left me hungry

empty and yearning

for the peace of home.

Answer 8

Maybe one of these?

It is without my place in harmony of which I have pocessed as my true being, my chosen offering.

To my beast of the berry, I have search but with whom I have not found another place on this earth, to it, you are my home.

It was the sun, the moon under which I travel, discovering my surrounds in the uphills of the earth, but to thee, I have already found, my place, my home.

I hope this helps!

Answer 9

i am not a poetess but I would suggest this for you:

Seeking  the edge of the world,

Trying to find the word

a long journy it is  

in this faraway world

I am to find

A land composes me the rhyme

A land worths more that a dime

A land stops the time