Anyone else having problems with there questiosn not postingfor a long time ? anyway what you think of this ?

Question

a many bones is as i see you

hardly human in the eyes of the venue.

the outside is weak

the inside is beat

a day closer to death

please come back to the rest

the mirror tells the truth

but your eyes, they hold the fruit

So close them tight

and just take a bite...

one day at a time

you'll someday find

Your not alone

and you need more meat on your bone

just ask for the help

and all hands will go up

my dear friend

don't make this the end

wake up from this dream

and belt out a scream

tomorrow you must live

or some day soon the beats will give.

Answer 1

Good.  I know where you are coming from.  I hope the person gets help.