Anyone have any comments on this poem?

Question

High Risers

Fragmented words, thoughts, ideas

laid out on the paper in an organzized way

like puzzle pieces

and who knows what

they all say.

Juts of this and cuts of that,

clear as mud and ceiling wax

a jumbled up mosh of confusion

but profusely proclaimed by critics. Bravo!

But the ordinary man

in everyday life is blinded still

left hungry and thirsty for

that which would satisy

if only he understood the rules.

So highminded are they,

adrift upon clouds of accolades

they forgot that words

could point the way

to salvation and hope.

Answer 1

I really like this, I'm surprised it has no comments. The flow is very good and you are using unique images. Great job!

Answer 2

The mood of our era, power and greed, I hear you.