Anyone want to critique this video?

Question

My friend and i make "Chelsea the Explorer" videos. Its sorta a teenage version of Dora the Explorer.

http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.individual&videoid=25110754&searchid=91fdc674-38bc-4a60-94da-653fb813f996

This is only the second one we've made. This is the "christmas edition." Yes, its sorta long and not very good. It was only our SECOND one! And four to five minutes of it was bloopers :] Any advice to make it better? Like make the "globe" part shorter?

And we are about to make a fourth one. We want to make it the "gangster edition." "Gangster" as in two young girls wearing "chains" and "bathing apes" and wearing airbrushed shirts that have a big $ on the front. Any ideas for our video?

I want to be a video editor when I get older. Be nice :]

BY THE WAY. I'm chelsea the explorer.

Answer 1

You need to spruce up your background and choreography.

Answer 2

I'd say when you use songs actually put them on in the video editor and mute out the background sound or at least fade it.  Also maybe try something along the lines of a microphone(if your really serious about these)

Answer 3

I laughed.

And laughed.

And laughed.

But in a good way. :)

Answer 4

just a little over-overacted. hehe

Answer 5

I couldn't even finish the video.. Not funny at all. But that's just my opinion.. Good luck.