Anyone willing to edit/critique college admission essay?

Question

I was wondering if anybody would mind editing my first draft of my college essay. I horrible at grammar and need help with it. Essay is only 500 words. Post if you are willing! Thanks

Answer 1

Sure I'd be willing to read through it and help you correct any grammar and spelling errors.  You can email it to me at [e-mail]

Answer 2

Sure, I'm pretty good at grammar myself. =) Email at [e-mail]