Well at the moment (at school) we are taking myths from Ancient Greece and turning them into scripts. My group chose Odysseus and the Cyclops, and we now have to write our own scripts. Here is some dialogue and stage directions from my first scene.
Daedalus: (Begins shuffling feet, speaking quietly and nervously) Um sir…? (Clears throat and speaks louder and with more confidence) Sir?
Odysseus: (Speaking in an irritated voice, waving hands at Daedalus) What is it now?
Daedalus: (Clearing throat again, looking timidly at feet and talking
quietly)
Surely we should pay our respects to Poseidon before returning home to Ithaca? I feel we are doing him a great disservice by ignoring his contribution to the war. We do not want to anger the gods. (Looks up at Odysseus as he finishes speaking)
Daedalus is Odysseus's man. Just tell me if the dialogue and the stage directions seem alright. By the way, it isn't formatted like that, the computer just made it look a little strange. The reason why I'm asking is that our English teacher never tells us whether our work is well written etc.
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