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Are "deep thinkers" shallow?

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I have never been one

to partake in deep thoughts

Relishing the surface of things

I see outer beauty

and appreciate it

Questioning not what I see

believing that my eye can behold beauty

I was approached and judged

for enjoying things I see

a deep thinker said "there is more to it"

I cared not for this "more to it"

I enjoy it

allow me to be shallow

I am happy with the low tide

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  1. I am happy with the low tide


  2. I like being the one hiding the colored eggs and not telling the kiddies where I've put them, unless I see a sad little girl or boy whose basket has no eggs inside, and then I might hint or point.

  3. This poem is stellar.

    I applaud you for not letting the sea of deep thinkers cast you out in the tide.

  4. Deep

  5. you believe what you see with your sensory perception.. while deep thinkers take nothing for granted, I think it quite noble to take nothing for granted.  

  6. As one who ponders things like the reason for the origin of the universe, and who created God, and how will it all come to an end, I can say with certainty that I enjoy a pretty scene, a lovely woman, a good hamburger, and most other shallow pleasing things in life.  Deep thinking has it's pace, but not as a full time occupation.

  7. You like surfing rather than diving?  A nice pen.  The idea of enjoying for what's there rather than trying to analyze everything and in the process missing out is refreshing.  I try not to ponder much when I eat an ice cream bar.  Well said.

  8. There is something to be said for enjoying the "low tide," a fine metaphor for the surface of things. However, it should not preclude "deep thoughts;" they are what separate Homo Sapiens from the rest of Earth's animals.


  9. I think that you are probably far from shallow and although I should just enjoy the beauty of words, I see a deeper meaning.  I agree that there is nothing wrong with enjoying beauty for beauty's sake and that we don't need to always seek a deeper meaning or understanding.  This is a provocative poem that is just as lovely on the inside as it is out.

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