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Are these American Haiku not done in the 5,7,5 format though except 1?

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Rubies dropped,

Splattered across floor,

Mafia Strikes.

Hand map’s Life’s journey

Line doted paths Placed on hand,

Palm reading complete.

Spring Dance,

Twirling winds,

Ballet duo

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  1. I like.  Spellcheck would help!  lol


  2. Yes I believe  that there are other forms of Haiku and not the 5-7-5 form-- here is one by David Cobb--

    across the fields of stubble

    flame   stalks   flame

    which is a total of 10 syllables

    Here is one by Lee Guiseck

    dry well

    the dropped stone's

                                thud

    This one consist of 10 syllables!

    The spelling part of it neoman was talking about (I think he was referring to) was the word map's  maybe should be maps--not sure but that could be what he was referring to.

    I don't know if this did help you --I sure hope so --its lots of fun, and so much to learn!  Cheers  --I like what you have written above it sure does sound like haiku to me!

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