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The Once and Future King, by T.H White, is a splendid classic tale of a young hero's journey, from burdensome tests to rewarding prizes.

In the Once and Future King, by T.H White, a true king of England must be wise, compassionate, and attentive to the men, and woman of England.

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The Once and Future King, by T.H White, is a splendid tale of a young hero's journey from burdensome tests to rewarding prizes.

In the Once and Future King, a true king of England must be wise, compassionate, and attentive to the men and women of England.