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Are these lines good for poems?

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ok these two lines are from two totally different poems that i wrote i just want to know if they are good and what your thoughts are on them

line #1: "when I wished on a shooting star I didn't know that it was the meteor that was gonna crash into my dreams"

line #2: "every rose has some thorns but my rose always seems to have the most"

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  1. #1 most definitely, it just sounds better :]


  2. Very good lines ur a great poet!!!!~

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