Are these main points for a speech on unemployment rate in the Bay Area good?

Question

"Something should be done about unemployment in the Bay Area."

1st main point- Unemployment is increasing in the Bay Area

http://www.mercurynews.com/ci_9923046?IA...

2nd main point- People are having a hard time find a new job.

Answer 1

I think you need to be a bit more explicit than general.

1. Something should be done about sweeping generalizations.

2. People are having a hard time taking the initiative to research detail