Are these sales copy headlines correct and understandable?

Question

"Discover How Three Idiot-Proof Money Making Ways

Can Help YOU Out of Rat Maze You're Stuck In Within

30 Days or LESS!"

(P.S. Please answer my question sincerely. I'm serious!)

Answer 1

I hate those crappy ebooks. Try;

Discover 3 idiot-proof ways to make money and help you out of the/ your rat maze within 30 days !!



- Although I have no idea what a rat maze is, or why you'd want to include that phrase lol (is it because it rhymes ? is rhyming important for your headline? )

It still isn't great but I tried to keep it close to the original. I think it makes a bit more sense.

Answer 2

This headline needs to be shorten. A headline is suppose to be catchy and short, and this one is wordy and distracting.