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Are these sentences correct and understandable?

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<sub headline:Don't be fooled by all the secrets just reveal crappy infos and even sell over $39 on the internet!>

Are you tired of finding how to make money from home on the internet?

Do you still believe in there's a secret weapon to earn money effortlessly?

Don't keep spinning around in rat maze. It's easier than you think!

What I have for you now is completely "Fool-Proof" in it's simplicity!

(Above sentences are just sales copy or something like that. Please correct those writings make it grammatical and understandable if it's needed. Please answer my question sincerely. I'm serious!)

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  1. Corrections below, all sentences including sub headline:

    Don&#039;t be fooled by all the secrets THAT just reveal crappy information and even sell IT online FOR over $39.

    Are you tired of finding OUT how to make money from home on the Internet?

    Do you still believe IN a secret weapon (or THAT there&#039;s a secret weapon to EARNING money...) to earn money effortlessly?

    Don&#039;t keep spinning around in A rat maze.  It&#039;s easier than you think!

    What I have for you now is completely &quot;fool-proof&quot; AND SIMPLE!

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    Hope this helps.

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