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Are these sentences correct in English grammar?

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I'm new here today and just wanna say hello to all members of this forum.

I've experienced the internet marketing online for several years but there was no big deal to make a living online and to recommend for other people.

But in this time of worry, I feel like I'm close enough to make money using the proven little known secret which is using by gurus every single day.

I'd like to share with you guys all some tips and tricks to make money in this forum and hope those make each single person more money.

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Can you guys understand these sentences without difficulty ?

Any correction needed ? Please answer my question sincerely!

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  1. The lines I saw as unclear, I

    corrected.

    I'm here today, and hello to the

    new forum members.

    I've experienced Internet marketing

    on-line for several years.  It isn't hard

    to make a living on-line, and I recommend

    it to others.

    I make money using the gurus secret.

    I'd like to share the tips and tricks

    with you, and help make you money.


  2. It's understandable, but readers will struggle a bit comprehending it.

    "I've experienced internet marketing for several years. It's not a big deal, and i actually recommend it to others."

    "However, in this time of worry, i feel more inclined to make money using the little-known secret gurus use every single day."

    "I'd like to share with you guys (all or some?) tips and tricks to make money here in this forum; and i hope these help everyone make more money."

    Hope this helped. XD

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