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Are you a good songwriter?

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I want to write a song about A boy and a girl who are best friends and have been for years but the girl is in love wiht him but hes in love with someone else. They share all their secrets with eachother but this is the one thing the girl can't tell him because she doesn't want to ruin their friendship because he never stays friends with his ex girlfriends.

This is a true story about me and my best friend. Can someone help me write the chorus and i can do the rest...i am just drawing a blank!

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  1. Don't want to be Too Close To The Fire

    Not so close to the skin, where it burns me again,

    Don't want to give in to desire

    Falling all the way out means never getting back in

    If love's not in the plan, I'll just keep what I can

    More reliable than admired,

    never Too Close To The Fire


  2. here's something right off the top of my head. very spontaneous. hope it helps.

    i bleed when i see her wearing your sweater

    cause i know that i can love you better

    more than friends is where i wanna be

    so i cry, cause i know you're not dreaming of me

    i'll never hurt you, cause you've swept me off my feet

    i've built a castle for your heart to keep

    so, would it be okay to call you 'love'?

    so, i wrote that up in about a minute. pretty awful, i know - but there's some ideas in there that you're free to run with. good luck...with the song, and the boy. :)

  3. I got a rocket in my pocket

    you got a photo in your locket

    we have a flame getting hotter

    go find a pale of water

    Jack and dianne went up behind the shade tree......

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