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Are you feeling hungry?

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a lite repast offered this morn

Appetite

An hour tastes fine

to those who pause

but to ponder a day…

requires an appetite.

So too, a lifetime

as hunger calls to you.

And will you fill

your plate, with this food

or are you…

just a dieter?

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  1. haha yess. todays my birthday!


  2. Enjoyed it.....and hungry for more served by Neon!

  3. I'll take a plateful of lifetime, huge side of laughter(don't be stingy with the giggles!), ocean of happy gravy, and a whole gallon of good dreams that come true.....thus, too, the poetry that will always bring out this answer...right on time, Neon!!!!

    Good Morning!

  4. The more I feast here, the more I forget mealtimes.  

    " A jug of wine, a loaf of bread, and Thou"  the best feast of all!

  5. A mere nibble to excite the taste buds of the soul and start a craving.

  6. Oh, I just love this. So different and clever.

    Please comment mine!

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  7. Wonderful metaphoric poem.  I have been feasting on poetry. I will never again be hungry as long as poets fill my plate.

  8. I like what you did with the metaphor...you could easily expand this into a larger piece if you were so inclined--the central theme is strong (though of course that's up to you).

    Best,

    Todd

  9. i didnt know i was hungry for more, until i read this...thank you for the right words at the right time. please sir, may i have some more??

  10. When it comes to living, laughing and loving I have a very hearty appetite.

    Thank you for this, I enjoyed it very much!

  11. I guess this means if I don't strive to be more than I am, as well as  take a few chances in life I'm stuck here without the banana pudding I so desire... but I only thought it would take a few seconds, I didn't know it would take a lifetime. note: I don't want a bowl, I want the whole darn thing.

  12. Feed the hunger, but do not over stuff - or dieting will be a necessity.

  13. "Hi!",

    'Yes', your meals are always fulfilling and taste really sweet."

    WELL DONE!

    Cheers.

    P.S: don't cook in your poems to much. My husband could taste the bacon from yours last time and it got me cooking at 4:am. My household are all asleep. (PEACE YAHHHHHH WOOHOOO!) : )

    I'm enjoying being lazy reading poetry.

    Thanks for checking my poems out, : )

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