Are you indifferent to this piece, or, have I somehow captured the moment?

Question

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CURIOSITY KILLS

Smoke and fog

creep from the bog

and dogs bawl out

for their masters,

Sneak and creep

to take a peek

at forest’s deep

shadow caster,

What you’ve seen

is not dream,

do not turn around,

run faster…

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Answer 1

V3 line 2    "a" missing

Is not a dream

Otherwise very good

Answer 2

You've got me scared and running.

Answer 3

dark and spooky, I love it. A little unsatisfying, I want to know more! I'm a curious sort... oops, bad news for me.

Answer 4

i need points

Answer 5

And here I sit holding my breath to find out what is there, until I finally pass out from lack of air and fall from my chair.

Answer 6

indifferent to all i think

but you definatey captured a moment.

i still turned around anyway

and saw only my shadow,

just as i heard Dondi fall from his chair.

lol..i think hes breathing ok now.

Answer 7

You captured the moment of an excellent descriptive fabricated imagination creeping around in the fog.

Answer 8

Yes, you've captured a frightening moment.  It makes me wonder what was seen.

Answer 9

The formidable shadow caster  escapes from a great abyss cracked open in his  demented mind, crawls down  and prowls  the cemetery  after dark searching for  own his lost  soul.

Imaginations all alive and working overtime! good Job!

Answer 10

Very ghostly and/or demonic. Perfect, moving imagery.

Answer 11

I think the moment has stopped for a second until the time is right to move on. Nice poem.

Answer 12

"Hi!"

Don't know the tittle of the movie but the plots there.

WELL DONE!

Cheers : )

Answer 13

OK Stephen, when is the movie coming to theatres around the world?  lol

Answer 14

This is the poem about that stupid guy that just has to find out what that strange light was coming from the Old McCurty house up on the bog...

Some people say Demons was at work.

Idiot.

Fun poem TD