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Are you starting to see?

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I stepped back

for the first time in my career

as a Seeker

unsure of myself,

my next step…

I never knew what love was

Never felt it…

…

received it

But I could see it

in an enemies tear

“What has this Drug Boss done

to warrant such loyalty”

I asked

“I don’t know…”

Not exactly the answer

I had hoped for

-Here we see Charlotte’s search for love… in some small way, she has always been looking…

What are your thoughts? Is this still confusing or are you starting to see?

Blessed Be in Love… just Love, Siren

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  1. They are getting smoother as you go along. I think you're starting to hit your groove Siren.

    Here are some line comments to use as you will:

    I stepped back

    for the first time

    as a Seeker

    unsure

    of myself,

    my next step…

    I never knew what love was

    Never felt it…

    …

    received it

    But I could see it

    in an enemy's tear

    “What has this Drug Boss done

    to warrant such loyalty?”

    I asked

    “I don’t know…”

    Not exactly the answer

    I had hoped for

    It's coming together.


  2. She still hasn't "found it" because it still belongs to someone else, even though she sees it. She has learnt something from someone she has spent 2 minutes confronting? Rare to do that. I think she is mellowing, but what repurcussions this has we are sure to find out next.

    You are a great student of human nature Siren. It shines.

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