Are your roots simple or gray?

Question

Roots

Grounded by this point

so far off in space

a point in place

Small beginning,

a starting...

the essence formed

Evolving

living the journey

but always grounded

By this point in place

Answer 1

Can they be both?

Nicely put!

Answer 2

"At this point in time, to my best recollection, those telephone conversations were not taped."

Answer 3

Interesting, this must be a martian experience.  Is it  "gray" or "grey"?

Edit

Thanks Neonman i had to ask as its twice Ive seen it spelt that way. I looked it up and this is what i found:-

grey - gray      

Grey became thee established British spelling in the 20th century, pace Dr. Johnson and others, and is but a minor variant in American English, according to dictionaries. Canadians tend to prefer grey. Non-cognate greyhound is never grayhound.

Answer 4

I hate being grounded!  Let's go to Mars.

Answer 5

"Hi!"

build me a space ship so i can escape.

I would like to travel between both points, but only glimpse at the end.

Answer 6

You need to be grounded, or you crack up!

Answer 7

Evolving, And after years many sprouts return.

The basic foundation, I for one love 'me roots for better or

worse.

As you would say,"well penned"

Answer 8

My roots are simply gray, but change with my mood.

"Moody Roots"  When's the next ship sailing Mars?  To be grounded on Mars... Wonderful poem, Neon.  Thanks.

Answer 9

the last line would flow better if you said "but always in the ground" if that makes sense, if not, then it's fine... I love your poem! it al flows really well, and you didn't make any spelling mistakes. "A point in place" is a sweet line! Keep it up!

~Lizzy

Answer 10

what was that old rhyme?

"round and round and round  I go

but  where I stop nobody knows."

this concept of being is wholly mysterium...but

beyond the gates of perception.... delirium .

Answer 11

Well said! I'm with Elaine...all lift off to Mars!