Ask Gideon; Drowning in the crowd; Care to comment?

Question

Drowning, sea of silence

Waves constantly pound my head

Rescue seems impossible

Heart torn, cast to the wind in shreds

Crying is vanity to life’s busyness

Self claims sanctuary in self

Imagining life’s reality

A hand pointing down to h**l

No life jacket from friendships won

Sense the darkness, she comes

Slowly revealing form

Her cup in hand, I thirst.

Answer 1

I never have to Ask Gideon for a masterpiece.  Well said friend.

Answer 2

Wow good. For a while there thought you stopped writing poems.

Answer 3

very good

Answer 4

This poem contains many excellent poetic expressions. I especially like "No life jacket from friendships won" and "Her cup in hand, I thirst."

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