Perpetually Alone
confined to the dark corners of my tortured mind
i hide in the darkness;
hide from the world, from myself
shivering from the fear, shaking from the pain
my blood soaked heart beats a broken rhythm
with every shattered beat i breathe the pain
there is no escape
as i slowly fade to the world
i hide in the shadows of an aching past
wishing, wanting, yearning for an end which will never come
for i am alone
perpetually alone
so what do you think? does it sound good? professional? does it make you feel something? is it relatable? is it good enough to be published? what should i change? what is the worst part? the best?
^^please answer any of the above. thank youuu
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