Be honest ... what do you think...?

Question

The way you smile

The way your eyes shine

The sheer beauty of our love

The feeling of being lost in time

Of everlasting tranquility

The way you make me see

Our heart and soul joined together

For all eternity

The way you make me laugh

The way you hold me when I cry

A love so deep and special

Will never end in goodbye

The natural high I feel when I'm with you

The way you love me....

So endless, sweet and true

Now can you see

All the reasons I love you

Answer 1

I think that my smile shines.

I think that my eyes glow.

I think that our love is precious.

I fell that when I´m in love.

I like to feel in peace.

I like to make you smile.

I love to make you feel complete.

I´d like to be with you.

It's the way I fell happy.

Is the time I appreciate your feelings.

It is when we kiss and sleep together.

It is the way we share happiness.

Is the sublime way when you meke me feel heaven.

The real way our love is, fearless, and completely passionated one for each other.

You are in love my darling, Congratulations!

Answer 2

that was good

Answer 3

If this is a song ur writing.. congrats.. its realy good..

If this is a poem ... even better.

"So endless, sweet and true"

Best Part.

Bless.

Answer 4

Sometimes ,there is just not enough vomit in the world

Answer 5

i actually loved it!

[it's very to the point/ but it also makes you think about what's bein said!!]

Answer 6

Tank you, now i know how much you love me.

i knew it!!!

im joking, is really beautiful your poem, congratulations!!

Answer 7

god pass me the sick bag

Answer 8

aw,try make it a bit more personal though, its more like something that should be on the inside of a card, nice though! keep going and keep posting any more work!

Answer 9

Clear

still

In full

only in my dreams

I pray for that

Hope well

That is armony

Is too much

I'm so proud of that

Always believe in me

Mine

I'm not so sure about this

Well that is normal

Yes I do...

Sweet and true for now

I see

She is lucky.