Blue blue my rainbows are blue but though their there

Question

they're a secret amongst the blue sky, oh my love whare my bow in your hair, and let our hearts become as sticky as vanilla honey. >>>>---wew----> diary

Answer 1

Er, well I'm just gonna think you want help re-phrasing it / making spelling and grammatical corrections? If that's the case, here's the revised version:

''Blue, blue;

my rainbows are blue.

But although there,

they are a secret amongst the blue sky.

Oh my love,

wear my bow in your hair,

and let our hearts become as sticky as vanilla honey."

I think it's a really pretty poem, but you made a huge leap from describing rainbows to your love, so I'm guessing the rainbows symbolize your love; it's secretive? If that's the case, then maybe add something like 'as is my everlasting desire' right after the fourth line.

Hope I could be of help.