CAn You PLease REad My Poem?

Question

I just wrote it and may add two more stanza's to it.

The title is Her body is sinned/mind tainted/and heart corrupted

http://allpoetry.com/poem/4421879

Please write more then one sentence

What Do You Think The Poem Is About ?

What Do You Think Of It?

What Do You Think Of The Title?

Answer 1

I LOVE IT! J'aime ton poem :P It's deep and short, I love it, you should publish it

Answer 2

Great poem.... Scary though. If you don't mind me asking, Is this about a rape?

Answer 3

I'm not great at looking into deep and meaningfuls but...

this sounds like a young girl being sexually abused....

it's very deep  - sickening thought unfortunately

Title is a bit long for a short poem

Answer 4

I'm very concerned but the poem was very good... I felt the emotion through the words.. again..very concerned though...