Came up w/ it in 5.....need comments on how im doing.?

Question

sitting here alone w/ you

seems that all that is,is you.

flowers will bloom like my love for you

like the sun rises,in the 6th month,june.

now you're gone,what do i do?

seems that all that was,is lost.

nowhere to go

no one to see

I'll wait for you right by the sea.

where you and i are bound to meet.

Answer 1

you are a romantic dude...two thumbs up

Answer 2

wOW  i liked this poem as it is from  the heart and not full of fluff' .It's beautiful and it made me smile.

Answer 3

nice. i reccomend adding some deeper words and maybe changing some comma placements. IT ROX OTHERWISE!!!!!!!!

Answer 4

u are very romantic i liked it  :)