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Can't decide which quote to use?

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I have to do a small bioagraphy on myself and i have to come up with an original quote, i came up with three that are almost the same, but different wording. Please tell me which one's the best!

[1] “Always have a plan B, when you have something planned out really well, one thing or everything usually goes wrong.”

[2] “It’s always good to have a plan B, not everything in your first plan will go well.”

[3] “Don’t Settle for only a plan A, know that there will always be things that will go wrong, keep a plan B in mind.”

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  1. [1] “Always have a plan B, when you have something planned out really well, one thing or everything usually goes wrong.”

    In this case, your plan A was best though.


  2. i like 3

  3. I'd go for the second one, but rephrase it slightly:

    Instead of “It’s always good to have a plan B, not everything in your first plan will go well.”

    I'd put

    “It’s always good to have a plan B, as not everything in your first plan may go well.”

  4. Number 2.  Concise and logical.  Good job.  Your overall concept is very good.

  5. I liked quote three the best. =] But you might want to change it to 2 sentences, like this:

    "Don't settle for only a plan A, and know that where will always be things that will go wrong. Keep a plan B in mind."

    I like it like that. (:

    Good luck on your biography,

    xoCoco

  6. Definitely #2, it's less wordy. The other 2 are border line confusing b/c you have the commas in the wrong places and they appear to be run on sentences. 2 looks perfect.

  7. Number 2 is the best ...  concise is nice

    If you fail to plan you plan to fail

    You can always call the A-team if plan B fails :-D

  8. I like the third one =)

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