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Can't think of a title!! :(?

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Heya guyz. Well I'm handing in my Original Writing Short Story GCSE coursework soon and I am sooo stuck for a title.

The story itself is about a man who kills someone on a cruise shop and basically stops in his tracks and spends the next three years regretting it. Then he learns a form of hypnosis where you can give your feelings to someone else. He finds a random victim called Alex who is a CEO and hypnotizes his feelings into him. Alex basically goes mad and confesses himself to the police. While the police run an investigation Alex gets worse and worse. Eventually the police realize whats going on but its too late because Alex commits suicide.

I promise it's not as boring as it sounds :D I was thinking maybe something like black and white or letting go.

Someone help me plz :D Bye

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  1. Borrowed Sins?


  2. Time, regret, Hypnosis, cheat, suspect, mind double,

    I like your title black and white, it is very original.

  3. How about... umm .. using the name of the hypnosis method as the title? Hopefully it's one word because then it would sound really cool!

    >_< Hope that helps!

  4. i quite like Ananya G's 'killer hypnotist'

    good luck with ur writing btw =d

  5. maybe "hypnotized" or, "confessions under hypnoses"

    idk something short and catchy.  

  6. ...Confessing Regrets...

    Sorry if its not what you was expecting x

  7. "Sunder"

    It's the name of the soul keeper's ult in dota, which transfers his life to an unsuspecting hero.

  8. the killer hypnotist...it might make it sound a bit more eerie maybe?  


  9. How about "Hypnotic"

  10. How about:

    Hypnosis

    Pleasure Cruise

    Crime of Emotions

    Cruise Control

    Empty Shell

    Parasite

    Crime of Excellent Order (spells out CEO)

    Collection of Emotional Obliteration (also spells out CEO)

    Emotional Blackmail

    Okay thats all I can think of! Your story sounds similar to Clockwork Orange in that a man loses his emotions due to the fault of someone else and becomes a clockwork orange (a robot devoid of feeling) why not try something along those lines?

    Hope this helps you come up with a title.

    Good luck and happy writing!!

  11. How about "Regret"?

  12. Hold On

    The Past

    Mistakes

    Mistakes were made.

    Hypnotize

    Something short and mysterious would be great. I hope these suggestions help.

  13. well maybe something like this: Hypnosis to Death or Hypnosis leads to Sucidie, maybe something like that. Well good luck!

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