Can I Get Your Opinion On Something?

Question

I'm feeling the hate

The loathe towards me

So I'm in this hateful state

This is all I can be

Not that you'd care

You never have

This pain that I bear

I'd hate to share

So I'll just keep it all bottled up

Til the pain subsides

Or maybe I'll just cut them up

My arms, my legs, my sides

Answer 1

nice poem, but quite a bit of negative feelings in it.

hope you are over it and not cutting yourself anymore.

Answer 2

You have a strong sense of rhythm. Your poems are lyrical. They would make good songs.

Answer 3

You know how there are many emo or depressing (not towards you or anything) poems posted everywhere on the internet, well this one sounds quite a bit like those. If you want it to be more unique and hurtful (?) than i suggest you be more creative and make it bigger so its like a story. But that is just what i like reading!

I guess it really just depends on what bounces your ball! ;)