Can I get some feedback on my Magic deck?

Question

Land:

6 Forest

3 Isalnd

3 Mountain

3 Plains

3 Swamp

2 Glimmervoid

1 Mirrodin's Core

Creatures:

2 Suntouched Myr

2 Skyreach Manta

2 Sawtooth Thresher

1 Etched Oracle

1 Iron Myr

2 Suncrusher

1 Bottle Gnomes

1 Joiner Adept

1 Leaden Myr

1 Leonin Elder

1 Silver Myr

1 Myr retriever

1 Platinum Angel

1 Malachite Golem

1 Lunar Avenger

1 Composite Golem

Other:

1 Channel the Suns

2 Assert Authority

1 Fabricate

1 Thirst for Knowledge

3 Convolute

2 Powersink

1 Followed Footsteps

1 Dauthi Embrace

1 Dawn's Reflection

1 Opaline Bracers

1 Sculpting Steel

1 Clearwater Goblet

1 Darksteel Ingot

1 Energy Chamber

1 Cranial Plating

1 Infused Arrows

1 Darksteel Forge

NOTE - I do not plan on using this for tournaments. No way would this be good enough for official games. I just want to see how well you think I'd do in local games.

Answer 1

First off, Sarah B... WTF? Dude, Ancient Gear Golem is a Yugioh Card... not an MTG card. Also, this seems pretty decent. I would just find a few cards that you want as a four or three set, and take out cards you don't really need to replace with the cards that you want to draw more often, still a good deck.

Answer 2

Do not reconize any of those cards, however ancient gear golem would be a great addition.