Can I have ur opinion??thanks?

Question

Tell me when will man conquer over beast

the beast of coach and burberry seems to mighty

her fake smile always fools the young and the meek

but when will it i ask

when man will realize that the beast is as fake as her prada

i see past her eyeliner and into her eyes

i see fear

i see past her glossed lips

and her words that cut like glass

my wounds will heal

i will leave this battle of man vs. beast

proud

knowing who is the true beast

for i know it is not me

Answer 1

nice

Answer 2

I love it. Bloody brilliant! So evocative and the imagery? Wow! Wonderful work...thank you for sharing!

Answer 3

Don't give up the day job.

Answer 4

2 POINTS!