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Can I say goodbye, again, until then?

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Leaving on a plane

No longer to be a pain

You have some of my brain

I'm sure I'll have some more again

You all have been too kind

For tolerating my mind

With that I must sign

OUT

Peace to all who dared to care and share

There's no place like Mars

There's no place like Mars

There's no place like Mars

Oh so sincerely, ME

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  1. Don't stay away to long. Mars is quite hot and you have already been taking to much heat as is. I will save a spot for you and look foward to hearing back from you soon. I didnt tolerate you, I appreciated you-always


  2. HAVE A SAFE TRIP; AND IF YOU THINK YOU MIGHT MISS US, JUST TAKE YOU CELL PHONE, AND SEND US SOME POEMS FROM THERE!

  3. I knew the ruby slippers would fit!

    Travel safely, return in joy!

  4. Your poem reminds me of this one I wrote a long time ago.  

    There's no place like Mars.  Men are from Mars and the imagery back to the wizard of OZ.

    Cool Poem Thanks for sharing.

    Memory

    ----------

    The ocean spray splashes into the air causing a mist to form softly falling upon my face.

    I close my eyes only for a moment in anticipation to feel this mist as it touches gently upon my features.

    I can smell the scent of the sea as the breezes woos the fragrance from the water over the glistening hot sand to where I am.

    The aroma enters within my nostrils. I inhale clearing my mind in order that I may envision your image.

    LFT

  5. I wish I knew what was behind that hydrobrain of yours.....guess I will never find out .....I stopped being a space traveller and you are going to Mars....Have a great flight.....@--)---

  6. Fly high, land smooth

    Enjoy what is.

    Safely return

    you will be missed.

  7. A Pain you are not,

    Nor have  you been,

    Words  that you've penned,

    All have seen.

    Your,part of this page,

    now,for so many,

    You will be missed,

    Doub't there's not any,

    I sit baited breath,

    For

    Theres little left for me.

    Without you here now,

    I Just won't be me!

  8. It is actually good but it makes me wonder

    have you been to Mars cause yet I haven't

    but your poem sure makes me travel

    through the whole universe and all its wonders.

    So why stop at mars? lets go to Jupiter

    or even the sun, nothing can stop us

    all you gotta do compare mine to yours

    and see which one is better and which one is worse.

    http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;...

    Thanks!!!

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