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Can I start a story in 1st person but finish the story with 2nd person?

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I'm writing a story 1sr person, present tense! I have some parts to the story that sound good in this way, and bad if I do it 2nd person.

I don't want to do 1st person, present tense anymore. Now I want to write in 2nd person, past tense.

It it possible to change it? So far I've got the first chapter in 1st person, present tense. (I tried changing it, it doesn't sound very good when It's not the way it already was.)

PLEASE HELPP??

-Smanx in advance

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  1. Okay, I did almost the exact same thing with one of the books I was writing, except I changed it from third person to first person. I would say start fiddling around with the story to make it better. What I did was I changed every "she" to "I" and after I did that I read over what I had wrote (in the first person) and if it didn't look right, I changed it.

    "Keep writing, don't let anyone stop you."

    -Max


  2. i think you could. nut maybe instead of doing it suddenly, you could alternate the chapters the whole time.

    i think you shouldn't do it if its the same person though, only if your switching narrators.  

  3. Stephanie-san, there IS such a thing as 2nd person. It is very difficult because it says 'you' a lot. What I think everyone is thinking of is 3rd person.

    I would not suggest writing in 2nd person or switching the point of view. If you aren't happy with first person, then rewrite in (I suggest) 3rd person. 2nd person is very confusing and difficult to write.  

  4. yes


  5. You mean 3rd person I'm assuming, not too many books in 2nd person.

    singular

    1st person - I ran around the corner.

    2nd person - You ran around the corner.

    3rd person - She ran around the corner. (Feminine)

                           He ran around the corner (Masculine)

                           It ran around the corner (Neuter)

    plural

    1st person - We ran around the corner

    2nd person - You guys ran around the corner

    3rd person - They ran around the corner

    Ok, now to answer your question, no, don't do that. You need to pick one way and be consistent.

    I would recommend writing in 3rd person. It's a lot easier, which is good if you are a new writer, which it sounds like you are.

    I think you should try to rewrite your first chapter, sorry, over all it'll make it sound better.

    Good luck

  6. Umm, no such thing as second person.

    My advice is to pick a  tense and stick to it Maybe the only reason the beginning of the story doesn't sound good in the other tense is because you're just used to it in 1st person.

    Good luck.  

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