Can You Give Me Your Opinions?

Question

I posted this on my account that i go on more but wanted more answers.

http://allpoetry.com/poem/4421879

I just wrote it and may add two more stanza's to it.

Tragedy strikes and they still look past her

Never noticing the scars on her heart.

Cuts go unnoticed and bruises scatter on her skin.

She screams but no sound comes out.

Shadows linger in the hallway.

Their coming for her they always do.

Sorry is a word she's never heard.

Pleasure is something she'll never feel.

She's an empty shell cracked open way too soon.

She hides her body in disgrace scared of what they might discover.

Questions echo in her mind as bodies lays on top of her.

Whispers surround her room as she cowers into the corner.

Her mind is tainted and her body covered with sins.

Innocence is departed and damage remains.

Please write more then one sentence

and what do you think the poem is about and what you think of it.

Answer 1

I think it sounds like a girl who has been beaten

Its really well written, well done :)

Answer 2

Is the girl a victim of gang abuse?  She's not just emotionally scarred but physically hurt too...and she's helpless.