Can You Tell Me What You Think Of My Poem?

Question

I just wrote it and may add two more stanza's to it.

The title is Her body is sinned/mind tainted/and heart corrupted

http://allpoetry.com/poem/4421879

Please write more then one sentence

What Do You Think The Poem Is About ?

What Do You Think Of It?

What Do You Think Of The Title?

Answer 1

It says that your poem is in the adult category and you have to be old enough or have an account or something to view it.

Answer 2

The title is to long. Try maybe just "Her body" Its a very sad poem and I pray its not from a self reculection. However it shows such insight into how a girl who is abused feels. I like it and hope you can get it published. I must say its a lot better then some of the other poetry I have read on here.