Can any english speakers please check my english sentences?

Question

Hi!

I translated a song to english which I will share with my friends.

Would you please proofread it? Does it make sense?

Thank you!

I waited for a long time

because you were the one that I wanted

Hiding the sadness

and lying to myself

I've let you go

Maybe I wanted to hold on to you

I can still see myself

in your tears

It's so heartbreaking

to erase all the memories

I remember you

I’ll tell you now

that long wait

Since you left me

I can't see your smile anymore

But I’ll always remember

everything about you

I only left you

with scars deeper than love

Now I realize

that I am regretting it

Though everyone left

you are the one left for me

Trapped in our memories

you were crying

Now I can’t say

anything to you

you might forgive me

who wasn't good enough for you

You protected me

and always comforted me

I only gave pain

to the person like you

I imagined

you being near me

I will now give you

all my dreams

:D

Answer 1

It's perfect !

Well-Done !

Answer 2

Its perfect! No mistakes x

Answer 3

Excellent job, it looks perfect.

Answer 4

ditto

Answer 5

Perfect.

And good writing too.

Answer 6

10/10. I see no flaws in your lyrics here! I hope one day my German is as good as your English!