Can any rate my Felgrand Deck & maybe give some suggestions on how to improve it?

Question

20 Monsters:

2- Felgrand Dragon

2- Darkblaze Dragon

3- Masked Dragon

1- Kaiser Sea Horse

1- Decoy Dragon

1- Spear Cretin

1- White-Horned Dragon

1- Flame Ruler

1- The Creator

1- Tyrant Dragon

1- Gilford The Lightning

1- Twin-Headed Behemoth

1- Herald Of Creation

1- Horus The Black Flame Dragon Lv6

1- Horus The Black Flame Dragon Lv8

1- Van'Dalgyon The Dark Dragon Lord

12 Spells:

2- Premature Burial

1- Giant Trunade

1- Soul Exchange

1- Foolish Burial

1- The Shallow Grave

1- Mystical Space Typhoon

1- Lightning Vortex

1- Shield Crush

1- Pot Of Advirce

1- Brain Control

1- Monster Reborn

8 Traps:

2- Sakuretsu Armor

2- Draining Shield

1- Magic Jammer

1- Negate Attack

1- Curse Of Royal

1- Dimension Wall

Answer 1

Not bad...but i would take out the dimension wall and add a magic cylinder, or threating roar. and maybe add a few more flame lord you seem to be focusing on fire elements. Just remember that when focusing on offensive decks the trick is to be able to get your monsters out. if you can find a black horn of heaven, and a hidden book of spell that wouldn't be a bad addition.