Can any1 revised this? and give the meaning of this?. Is it good if i give this to my loveone as a card?

Question

"You aren't going to be his 1st, his last, or his only... he’s loved before; he will love again. But if he loves you now, what else matters? He’s not perfect - you’re not either. If he can make you laugh and if he admits to being human and making mistakes, hold on to him and give him the most you can. He’s not going to be thinking about you every moment of the day, but he will give you a part of him that he knows YOU can break - his heart. So don’t hurt him, don’t change him, don’t analyze and don’t expect more than he can give. Smile when he makes you happy, let him know when he makes you mad and miss him when he’s not there. Because perfect guys don’t exist, but there’s always ONE guy that is perfect for you."

Answer 1

It is a nice poem thingy but i don't think I would like it especially the "He's not going to be thinking of you at every moment" she will know that already but wont want to hear it from you. someone else could tell her that but not the actual personaI don't know to me it sounds like your trying to cover your *** before you do the action

Answer 2

I think that's a horrid thing to put on a card - it basically says "yeah, I sort of love you , but not that much" :-(

Answer 3

nope. Although it contains some very touching and romantic bits... it also has alot of negative parts that may be taken the wrong way.

I always think... If you doubt for a second that something may be taken the wrong way DON'T do it/send it!

You never talk about past loves or loving others in a current relationship (unless asked). Its all about the here and now, or more appropriately you and her right now. everything else is irrelevant.

Hope this helps

Answer 4

But of all these friends and lovers

There is no one compares with you.

And these memories lose their meaning

When I think of love as something new.

Though I know I'll never lose affection

For people and things that went before

I know I'll often stop and think about them

In my life, I love you more.

- - -Beatles "In My Life"

Answer 5

Revised: I miss you. Don't make your new love cry like I do. Find happiness love. And harden the f**k up! She's gone!

Answer 6

ORIGINAL:  "You aren't going to be his 1st, his last, or his only... he’s loved before; he will love again. But if he loves you now, what else matters? He’s not perfect - you’re not either. If he can make you laugh and if he admits to being human and making mistakes, hold on to him and give him the most you can. He’s not going to be thinking about you every moment of the day, but he will give you a part of him that he knows YOU can break - his heart. So don’t hurt him, don’t change him, don’t analyze and don’t expect more than he can give. Smile when he makes you happy, let him know when he makes you mad and miss him when he’s not there. Because perfect guys don’t exist, but there’s always ONE guy that is perfect for you."

REVISED:  "You aren't going to be his first, his last, or his only.  He’s loved before; he will love again.  But if he loves you now, what else matters?  He’s not perfect--you’re not either.  If he can make you laugh, and if he admits to being human and making mistakes, then hold on to him and give him everything you can.  He’s not going to be thinking about you every moment of the day, but he will give you a part of him that he knows you can break:  his heart.  So don’t hurt him; don’t change him; don’t analyze; don’t expect more than he can give.  Smile when he makes you happy; let him know when he makes you mad; miss him when he’s not there.  Perfect guys don’t exist, but there’s always one guy that is perfect for you."

I don't think it would make a very good card, though.  It seems very... beggy, almost.  It almost seems like you're asking for your loved one to settle for you instead of appreciate you.  It also seems to beg the loved one not to try to change you or anything...  But then, I don't know what this card is trying to say.  Are you trying to intimate that your loved one is trying too hard to change you?  Or is this a spontaneous (or not so spontaneous) card that is supposed to bespeak your emotions for you?  If it's the latter, then there are so many other quotes much better than this one, and more appropriate.  This doesn't say anything about how you feel or anything; it seems very pleading, like I said.  I don't know.  I don't like it.  

Sorry.  I hope I was able to help, and I'm sorry if I sound discouraging!