Can anyone edit my essay? (it would be good if you have read the joy luck club) (please its 10% of my grade)?

Question

Please edit, i dont have anyone else to edit it for me.

Please type in your email address, and say what grade u are in, or age so I know you will edit correctly.

Thankes! :]

By the way, my task is to track a character in my book and track her development throughout. And cite specific examples of the character in the beginning, life changing experiences, and how they impact her by the end of the novel.

-Did i answer the task correctly?

-Are the specific examples (quotes) put in the essay correctly?

Thankes bunches!

Answer 1

I'd be happy to look it over for you, but I'm just going to correct grammar and sentence structure.  I'm a high school English teacher and I'm very glad to see that you're eager to hand in a correctly written paper! I really don't want to share my e mail address.  Is it possible for you to just cut and paste it in here?  I'll be logged on for a little while, so if I don't get to it by the time you log on...