Can anyone edit my essay? (please its 10% of my grade)?

Question

Please edit, i dont have anyone else to edit it for me.

Please type in your email address, and say what grade u are in, or age so I know you will edit correctly.

Thankes! :]

By the way, my task is to track a character in my book and track her development throughout. And cite specific examples of the character in the beginning, life changing experiences, and how they impact her by the end of the novel.

-Did i answer the task correctly?

-Are the specific examples (quotes) put in the essay correctly?

Thankes bunches!

Answer 1

I love English, so this should be fun. I'm in tenth grade, and I could do it today if you want.

Email: [e-mail] (inside joke)

Answer 2

Kind of fearful about doing this but I'm an okay editer English isn't my best subject but I'll give it a try. You would have to give me a couple days (one or two). and my email address is [deleted] so I don't get spam from people or people use my email to signup for garbage this was a long time ago I used to play the Yahoo pool game and so obviously I don't use this as a primary email account. I'm in college.

Additional: I've returned an email with an edited essay. I hope it isn't too late. August 13, 2008 12:30 p.m. I enjoyed the essay it was interesting to read.