Can anyone help me on this poem?

Question

fist which one u prefer

A)

Sorry our environment, we've made you sick

with all this pollution and earthquakes

but someday the world will speak...

"Stop making me cough, stop shaking me up

and help me get better, so i don't grow weak."

I must take control.

Take control and change this place.

No time to wait.

Global warming is here.

The world is slowly dying,

Soo we should be fast,

To save our planet,

More importantly,

ourselves.

So lets join hands,

And save the world

B)Sorry our environment which we’ve made u sick with all this pollution and earthquakes but someday the world will speak "Stop making me cough, stop shaking me up and help me get better, so i don't grow weak.”the environment that once was so beautiful...the one which was so dutiful...no longer exists because of us it is no longer usefulbut now we should help no time to wait cuse if it goes we go too

second can u help me by add more words

plz help me !

Answer 1

First of all, we don't cause Earthquakes, so you might want to take that little part out.  The tectonic movement of the plates over the magma core is what causes earthquakes, they are 100% natural.

So...that's all I will add to that, because I don't believe GW is man made.

Answer 2

yea... take the part about earthquakes... say "with all this pollution and global warming."

I like the first one better and i like the way you switched the words around.

Answer 3

here might be a better version

Stop teaching me this global warming BS !!!

the earth is not a fragile little ball floating in space

it was here before us and will be here after us

so unblock the servers and let me on MYSPACE !!!

Answer 4

Neither really because we do not cause earthquakes.