Can anyone please help me edit/proof read this please?

Question

english is not my first language and i've been suffering to get this much done. The problem is my teacher still said it's not good enough and gave me a low low grade the first time. She said this time she wouldn't be so linear with me.. please help....

In the past few decades of life the world has had a steady decline of cultural values, which has affected the way society views the world. The United States is made up of a vast variety of nations and cultures. Many of these nations have transformed from there old social norms to fit each of the various cultures. Some cultures believe that a woman should stay at home with the children, to cook and clean. While other cultures women have to work to support their family. However, we see today that more women are not in the home but in the work place. With the following questions I will try to demonstrate according to Kant happiness and respect.

Answer 1

the first answer is good.

but i am not sure what is 'Kant happiness'....

Answer 2

Hey there,

It's late but I will try and do my best. There are flaws with the first answer but a good try.

The world has experienced a steady decline of cultural values in the past few decades which has affected the way it perceives other cultures. For example, the United States is a melting pot and has citizens from many different nations and share different cultures.  These cultures have transformed their social norms so they can fit and belong to other usual ,expected  norms set by other cultures. For instance, where one social norm may believe that  a woman should be the primary homemaker and stay at home with children another culture may respect  a woman's role in working to help financially support the family.  Although, the social norm that I witness the most is where the woman is the primary parent but also works outside of the home. I will demonstrate how Kant's theory of Happiness and Respect best fits they way that societies view the world.

Good luck on your paper.

Answer 3

English is not my first language and I've been suffering to improve it. The problem is my teacher still says that it's not good enough and gives me a very low grade at the first look. She said that this time she wouldn't be so lean with me. Please help....

During the past few decades the world has had a steady decline of cultural values, which affected the society. The United States is made up of a vast variety of nations and cultures. Many of these nationals have transformed from their old social norms to fit in the US culture. Some cultures believe that the woman should stay at home with the children, to cook and clean while other cultures believe the woman should support their family by working. However, today we see that more women are not in the home but in the work place. I will try to demonstrate accordingly with the following questions to keep happiness and respect.

Answer 4

During(for) the past few decades of life, the world has had a steady decline in cultural values.This(of which) has affected the way society views the world today.

The United states of America is made up of people from variety of nations and hence vast cultures.many of these nationals have been transformed from their old social norms to fit each of these various cultures.In some cultures, people believe that, women should stay at home with the children, to cook and clean(should take care of the domestic chaos).while in other cultures, people believe that, women should work to support their families.However, we notice that, there are more women at work than at home today.With the following questions, i shall try to demonstrate according to Kant happiness and respect.

I hope i have been of help.That is how i would have written it.Good luck