Can anyone rate my Machine Deck & maybe give some suggestion on how to im prove it?

Question

19 Monsters:

2- Ancient Gear Knight

2- Machine King

2- Machine King Prototype

2- Proto-Cyber Dragon

1- Mechicalchaser

1- Cyber Laser Dragon

1- Cyber Dragon

1- Blowback Dragon

1- Ancient Gear Golem

1- Cyber Phoenix

1- V-Tiger Jet

1- W-Wing Catapult

1- X-Head Cannon

1- Y-Dragon Head

1- Z-Metal Tank

14 Spells:

2- Premature Burial

1- Brain Control

1- Soul Absortion

1- Spell Absortion

1- Giant Trunade

1- Nightmare's Steelcage

1- Soul Exchange

1- Overload Fusion

1- Pot Of Avarice

1- Riryoku

1- Mystical Space Typhoon

1- Monster Reborn

1- Photon Generator Unit

7 Traps:

2- Sakuretsu Armor

1- Ultimate Offering

1- Covering Fire

1- Hidden Book Of Spell

1- Grave Lure

1- Micro Ray

6 Fusions:

1- Cyber End Dragon

1- Chimeratech Overdragon

1- VW- Tiger Catapult

1- XY-Dragon Cannon

1- XYZ- Dragon Cannon

1- VWXYZ-Dragon Catapult Cannon

Answer 1

focus on a specific machine, you got xyz, ancient gear, cyber stuff, and normal machines. i would scrap everything but the cyber machines. they are pretty quick with fusion and out of play combos.

Answer 2

Focus on only 1 machine strategy. There is no sense in clumping Cybers with Ancient Gears, XYZ pieces and Machine King servants.

Deck 1 (XYZ Storm)

Monsters: 20

2 Jinzo

2 Cyber Dragon

1 Snipe Hunter

3 X - Head Cannon

3 Y - Dragon Head

3 Z - Metal Tank

3 Shining Angel

1 Cyber Phoenix

1 Morphing Jar

1 Marshmallon

Spells: 14

1 Limiter Removal

2 Frontline Base

2 Combination Attack

2 Hand Destruction

1 Lightning Vortex

1 Heavy Storm

1 Mystical Space Typhoon

1 Monster Reborn

1 Premature Burial

2 D.D.R. - Different Dimension Reincarnation

Traps: 6

1 Return from the Different Dimension

2 Roll Out!

1 Torrential Tribute

2 Bottomless Trap Hole

Total: 40 cards

Fusion Deck: 15

3 XYZ - Dragon Cannon

3 XZ - Tank Cannon

3 XY - Dragon Cannon

3 YZ - Tank Dragon

3 Chimeratech Fortress Dragon

Deck 2 (Ancient Gears)

Monsters: 21

3 Ancient Gear Golem

2 Ancient Gear Gadjiltron Dragon

2 Cyber Dragon

3 Ancient Gear Beast

3 Ancient Gear Knight

2 Elemental Hero Prisma

2 Blue Thunder T-45

1 Snipe Hunter

2 Ancient Gear Soldier

1 Morphing Jar

Spells: 15

1 Limiter Removal

2 Power Bond

2 Trade-In

2 Ancient Gear Castle

1 Reinforcement of the Army

1 Lightning Vortex

1 Heavy Storm

1 Mystical Space Typhoon

1 Monster Reborn

1 Premature Burial

1 Brain Control

1 Soul Exchange

Traps: 4

2 Royal Decree

1 Torrential Tribute

1 Mirror Force

Total: 40 cards

Fusion Deck: 9

3 Ultimate Ancient Gear Golem

1 Cyber Twin Dragon

2 Chimeratech Overdragon

3 Chimeratech Fortress Dragon

You could also think of using Gadget monsters if you'd like. I'm sort of an expert when it comes to machine-type dueling. Feel free to drop me an e-mail anytime and I'll try to help ya out.

Best of luck dueling.

Answer 3

overall, its a good deck, with good cards, but they dont all belong together, and heck, some of them dont even belong.

Micro Ray and Grave Lure can be thrown!

Soul Absorption and 1 premature can be thrown!

actually, if i could have my dream machine deck, it would look like this:

Monsters lv 5+ (7)

Machine King x2

Ultimate Machine King x2

Cyber Dragon x2

Cyber Reflect Dragon x1

monsters lv 4 or lower (13)

X-Head Cannon x2

Y-Dragon Head x2

Z-Metal Tank x2

W-Wing Catapult x2

V-Tiger Jet x2

Heavy Mech Support Platform x3

magic (5)

limiter removal x1

premature burial x1

monster reborn x1

The Dark Door x1

Overload Fusion x1

traps (16)

Attack Reflector Unit x1

Rare Metalmorph x3

Roll Out x3

Blast with Chain x3

Covering Fire x3

Formation Union x3

The Dark Door and Cyber Reflector Dragon will work together as a stall, keeping your opponent from attacking.

Covering Fire, Formation Union, and Roll Out can turn one weak monster into two monsters, one being quite strong.

Obviously the fusions would be in here for vwxyz and chimeratech. Im not saying build it like this, im just saying that this is my dream machine!

Answer 4

7/10

I'm not sure of the VWXYZ monsters, you should rely on gadgets instead. Then you can add Gadjiltron monsters, Dead Dynamo etc. VWXYZ belongs in a different deck. If you don't want Gadgets, then fine.

Take out Ancient Gear Knight.  It's a Gemini, you must normal summon it twice to be an effect monster. Also try to get another Cyber Dragon.

You don't have enough high lvl monsters. Get another Ancient Gear Golem (for Ultimate Ancient Gear Golem). Then add Trojan Horses.

Ancient Gear Drill is good, too. This card can really help pull off a great  Chimeratech-Overdragon OTK.

Answer 5

Ok, a common mistake among machine style duelists, the use of XYZ monsters, and ancient gear monsters as well. If you pick a theme, just use one theme, like go with Cyber Dragons, but don't mix them up with ancient gear monsters or xyz monsters because that will s***w it up for your strategies in the long run. If you go with a XYZ themed deck, I would suggest the use of cards that can get your removed from play monsters back into the game (Burial From a Different Dimension, Return from the Different Dimension, Dimension Fusion, etc...) and I noticed that this deck doesnt have a Limiter Removal (a must for any machine deck). If you want to go with Ancient Gear Monsters, I would try making sure that you try to have multiple Ancient Gear Castles, and a Cost Down wouldnt hurt that deck either. Good luck.

Answer 6

Its a nice deck I can say that. nice cards too. But listen man the machine king prototypes you don't really need. also you need to focus on at least two groups only (ancient gears,and so on.) don't go any higher. that way you can pull out more of the cards for fusions and any that you just need. also you want to have 40 cards max. also get some high lv. monsters with high attacks. then double check your deck if all your cards are tournament aloud.