Can anyone rate my Macro Monarch Deck 4.0?

Question

Monsters:

Caius the Shadow Monarch 2

Mobius the Frost Monarch 2

Zaborg the Thunder Monarch 2

Raiza the Storm Monarch

D.D. Survivor 2

D.D. Assailant 2

D.D. Warrior Lady

D.D. Scout Plane 2

D.D. Crow

Dark Magician of Chaos

Marshmallon

Cyber Dragon 2

Spell Striker

Morphing Jar

Spells

Monster Reborn

Heavy Storm

Mystical Space Typhoon

Reinforcement of the Army 2

Swords of Revealing Light

Dimensional Fissure 2

Allure of Darkness 2

D.D.R. - Different Dimension Reincarnation 2

Brain Control

Enemy Controller

Traps

Macro Cosmos 2

Dimensional Prison

Draining Shield

Mirror Force

Solemn Judgment 2

Return from the Different Dimension

Total: 41 cards

NOTE: ANY OFFENSIVE MATERIAL WILL BE REPORTED!!!

Answer 1

very good deck i like the build take out draining shiel for another dimesional prison. u want for your opponent to lose monsters not you gain life poins

9 out of 10 with that change

hope that helps

Answer 2

all i know is that this deck is better than my deck

Answer 3

your cards are great

rate: 9.5