Can anyone rate my new Yu-Gi-Oh! Zombie Deck?

Question

Monsters

Vampire Genesis 2

Vampire Lord 2

Vampire's Curse 2

Zombie Master 3

Mezuki 3

Goblin Zombie 2

Red-Eyes Zombie Dragon 2

Black Knight of Dark Dragon

Sangan

Morphing Jar

Marionette Mite 2

Spells

Allure of Darkness 2

Book of Life 2

Monster Reborn

Lightning Vortex

Brain Control

Card of Safe Return 2

Call of the Mummy 2

Zombie World 2

Traps

Tutan Mask 2

Solemn Judgment 2

Bottomless Trap Hole 2

Answer 1

Monsters take out : 2 Vampire Genesis , 2 Marionette Mite , 2 Vampire Lord.

Add : 2 il blud , 1 Black knight of dark dragon , 1 Spirit  Reaper , 3 Pyramid Turtle.

Spells Take out : none

Add : 1 Zombie World 1 Book of Life

Traps take out : 2 Tutan mask , 2 Solemn Judgement.

Add : 2 Royal Decree , Torrential Tribute.

then i would rate it a 8.8/10

Answer 2

not a bad deck at all but seems to be possibly missing pyramid turtle and il blud but still i'd give it 10/10 if you can get it, and only if you can get it, i recommend Mirror Force and sakuretsu armor if for no other reason monster removal, i also recommend Giant Trunade, heavy storm and mystical space typhoon for spell and trap removal, and Spirit reaper just in case you need some kind of field presence

Answer 3

yu-gi-oh is for kids like 8 yrs old.

Answer 4

it's all right, but you should have a couple of pyramid turtles in your deck. I give it 3.5