Can anyone rate my new Zombie Swarm Deck 4.0?

Question

Monsters 23

Vampire Genesis 2

Vampire Lord 2

Vampire's Curse 2

Spirit Reaper

Sangan

Morphing Jar

Pyramid Turtle 3

Zombie Master 3

Marionette Mite 2

Mezuki 2

Red-Eyes Zombie Dragon 2

Goblin Zombie 2

Spells 13

Zombie World 2

Call of the Mummy 2

Book of Life 2

Lightning Vortex

Monster Reborn

Heavy Storm

Card of Safe Return 2

Allure of Darkness 2

Traps 6

Solemn Judgment 2

Bottomless Trap Hole 2

Mirror Force

Torrential Tribute

NOTE: ANY OFFENSIVE MATERIAL WILL BE REPORTED!!!

Answer 1

I'm not an expert on yu gi oh but ur deck looks only ok not fantastic some good cards like red eyes zombie dragon use them right and u will do well

Answer 2

ZOMBIE SWARM DECK:

TOTAL:40

MONSTERS:18

3 Mezuki

3 Goblin Zombie

3 Zombie Master

3 Pyrimid Turtle

1 Spirit Reaper

1 Ill Blud

2 Ryu Kokki

1 Morphing Jar

1 Snipe Hunter

SPELLS:19

3 Card of Safe Return

3 Book of Life

2 Hand Destruction

2 Allure of Darkness

2 Burial From the Diffrent Dimension

2 Creture Swap

1 Card Destruction

1 Monster Reborn

1 Premature Burial

1 Mystical Space Typhoon

1 Heavy Storm

TRAPS:3

1 Mirror Force

2 Dust Tornado