Can anyone rate my poem? Constructive criticism also appreciated! ?

Question

I'm 14 and love writing poems and songs :-]] this one i wrote in like 6th grade but i modified it slightly to sound a bit more sophisticated. if anyone has constructive criticism i would appreciate it :-]

Beneath the Weeping Willow

When life strikes me

its mean eyes flashing

I go to my ancient friend

Willow

Her long spindly arms embrace me

Engulf me

Hide me from prying eyes

I lean against her solid form

listen to the inner moanings and creakings

of her wooden heart

Her whispery voice tickles my ear

mumbling nonsense

soothing

And then we weep together

a tumble of golden auburn

and diamond tears

entwined

Answer 1

I love it. I can see how you feel too.

The imagery was beautiful, as said previously. I could see everything you described.

I also liked your word choice and your sense of personification.

Keep writing! =]

Answer 2

Oh I loved it,you really have a way with imagery.