Can anyone rate my yu-gi-oh remove from play deck?

Question

I bought the dark emeperor structure deck but changed a few cards around:

Monsters (24)

- Bazoo the Soul Eater x2

- D.D. Warrior

- Banisher of Radiance x2

- Samasara Kaiser

- Exiled Force

- Fox Fire

- Homunculus the Alchemic Being

- Poison Mummy

- D.D. Assailant

- Caius the Shadow Monarch

- D.D. Warrior Lady

- D.D. Survivor

- Chaosrider Gustaph

- Gren Maju De Eiza

- Pitch-Black Warwolf

- Golden Homunculus

- Lesser Fiend

- Master Kyonshee

- Inpachi

- Nightmare Penguin

- Helios- The Primordial Sun

- Zera the Mant

Spells (21)

- Soul Release

- Sheild Crush

- D.D.R. - Different Dimension Reincarnation

- Ookazi

- Big Bang Shot

- Cup of Ace

- Fissure

- Eternal Rest

- Monster Reborn

- Nobleman of Crossout

- Zera Ritual

- Dimensional Fissure x2

- Lightning Vortex

- Reinforcement of the Army

- Giant Trunade

- Mist Body

- Enemy Controller

- Dark Core

- Malice Dispersion

Traps (16)

- D.D. Dynamite

- Karma Cut

- Sakuretsu Armor

- Metalmorph

- Return from the Different Dimension

- Magical Hats

- No Entry!!

- Minor Goblin Official

- Shift

- Just Desserts

- Macro Cosmos

- Spell Purification

- Torrential Tribute

- Fruits of Kozaky's Studies

- Shadow of Eyes

- Disappear

I played Yu-Gi-Oh for a while then stopped, I recently started playign again so I am nto a beginner in general but just with this type of deck. I am willing to make any adjustments. I am looking maybe to add monarchs but whatever you feel will help I will try to use. I appreciate all the help and I hope that if I am confused it is ok if I e-mal you.

Thanks

Answer 1

Meh.. This deck needs a lot of work.. Lol

Answer 2

Try this

Monsters (20)

- Bazoo the Soul Eater x2

- D.D. Warrior x3

- Banisher of Radiance x2

- Exiled Force x2

- Homunculus the Alchemic Being

- D.D. Assailant

- Caius the Shadow Monarch

- D.D. Warrior Lady

- D.D. Survivor

- Chaosrider Gustaph

- Pitch-Black Warwolf

- Golden Homunculus

- Master Kyonshee

- Inpachi

- Helios- The Primordial Sun

Spells (14)

- Sheild Crush x2

- D.D.R. - Different Dimension Reincarnation

- Cup of Ace

- Monster Reborn

- Nobleman of Crossout x2

- Dimensional Fissure x2

- Lightning Vortex

- Reinforcement of the Army x2

- Dark Core

- Malice Dispersion

Traps (6)

- D.D. Dynamite

- Sakuretsu Armor x2

- Return from the Different Dimension x2

- Mirror Force

Bye :)

Answer 3

this deck needs work, email me and ill give you a better deck list to work with