Can anyone rate this Yu-Gi-Oh! Deck?

Question

Monsters:

Peten the Dark Clown x2

Shadowpriestess of Ohm

Marauding Captain x2

Beastgod Machineking - Barbaros Ur

Chaos Necromancer

Sangan

Gravekeeper's Guard

Gravekeeper's Spy

Spirit Reaper

Plague Wolf

Wulf, Lightsworn Beast

Jain, Lightsworn Paladin

Needle Burrower

Chiron the Mage

Vampire Lord

Blue Thunder T-45

Cyber Valley

The Calculator

D.D. Survivor

Magical Marionette

Spells

Heavy Storm

Premature Burial

Emergency Provisions

Riryoku

Rush Recklessly

Veil of Darkness

Different Dimension Capsule

Swords of Concealing Light

Creature Swap x2

Reasoning

Traps

Magic Cylinder

Raigeki Break

Phoenix Wing Wing Blast

Crush Card Virus

Trap Dustshoot

Dimension Wall

Please tell me the cards I should add or drop and if possible, give me a DECKLIST pls.

Warning: Any offensive material or unnecessary answers will be reported!

Answer 1

Not too bad, but try to focus on a deck type, like, if you can, a lightswarn gravekeeper deck, or just one of them, i have a wicked gladiator beast monarch deck and it works because all the magic and trap revolves around the specific deck type giving it way more advantages.

Answer 2

dont waste your money on bits of card         it will ruin your life

Answer 3

( 4.0 out of 10 )

To many different types yo, you should try and specialize with a certain type. I will be honest with you, I don't use dark cards in my deck but maybe you should try this deck out! The deck is kinda complecated, but it should work.

MONSTERS: 22

x1 Belial- Marquis of Darkness

x1 Dark Horus

x1 Dark Nepthys

x3 Dark Crusader

x3 Double Coston

x3 Obsidian Dragon

x3 Peten the Dark Clown

x3 Shadowpriestess of Ohm

x3 Mystic Tomato

x1 Spirit Reaper

SPELLS: 14

x3 Dark Eruption

x1 Monster Reborn

x1 Premature Burial

x1 Pot of Avarice

x1 Emergency Provisons

x1 Mystical Space Typhoon

x1 Veil of Darkness

x1 The Shallow Grave

x1 Foolish Burial

x1 Reasoning

x1 Riryoku

x1 Rush Recklessly

TRAPS: 6

x1 Crush Card Virus

x1 Magic Cylinder

x1 Pheonix Wing Wind Blast

x1 Trap Jammer

x1 Zoma the Spirit

x1 Rising Energy

Answer 4

this is a really really bad deck. im sorry to tell u man. dont take it bad, u just focus on many types of cards. ur deck is 2/10. there is a new pack out called light of the daarkness. try making a deck out of the cards in that pack, theres some rlly good cards in it.