Can anyone tell me if this rough draft for a resume looks good?Ive never made a resume b4

Question

Ive put a link so everyone can see it. based on the fact that im not a high school graduate and it seems like im a job hopper-although ive never been fired- ive had to move so i was forced to quit

ive only worked at my dads restaurant as a cashier and soda person and ive worked as a personal assistant for a friend for money under the table and ive had ood jobs and i worked at a shoe store

ive been at my current job for a year

im going to an interview on Tuesday so i don't want mess this up

http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee90/tavern2468/Yahooreume.jpg

obviously ive blacked out my personal info

if there are any problems with this someone tell me

i dont wanna go in with an empty resume

Answer 1

Leave out the education part.

Answer 2

Absolutely eliminate your education.  It's not a positive, and you don't want to highlight negatives.  If they want to know, they'll ask.  Even then, just say you are working on your GED.  They don't need to know you only finished your sophomore year.

A few other things.

Write "customer inquiries" as opposed to "customer inquires"

Also, instead eliminate "environment" in your last qualification.

Rather than saying "2007 to currently here" say "2007 - Present".  Maybe don't even say it's been a year and four months.

You don't seem like that bad of a job hopper. In 2007, I had five jobs!

Answer 3

Capitalize EVERYTHING. Like Dollar tree should be Dollar Tree. Dont list your employment like that. One per line in a bulleted list. For Example:

Dollar Tree. (brief description of job)

Contact information

Footprints Shoe Store. (brief description)

Contact Information

Dont include education unless youve actually finished it. Leave that for College apps.

Get rid of the line that seperates education from employment.

Answer 4

it looks good